Review and interview
This novel won a Spur Award in 2005, and if the title
doesn’t ring a bell, it went at that time under the name Vengeance Valley, which Wheeler has said was not his first choice.
There’s little in the way of vengeance in
this mining camp story and a great deal more about a lot of other kinds of
human motives. There’s also no valley. Republishing the novel as an e-book,
Wheeler had the opportunity to restore his original title and seized it—one
might say with a vengeance.
Plot. There’s a lot
to like about this story of greed for gold. The most compelling character is
arguably the villain, Alfred Noble, a man without an ounce of nobility. On a
technicality of the law, he is able to claim the gold strike of the novel’s
title character, Will “Hard Luck” Yancey. Now kingpin of a mining syndicate,
with capital from investors back East, Noble has taken over the entire town,
lock stock and barrel.
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| Mining camp, Nevada, 1871 |
The only chunk of property he can’t claim as his own is a
spring-fed patch deeded to a handful of nuns, who operate a small hospital. The
hospital is run by a stalwart nun, Sister Carmela. Given the hazards of working
in Noble’s mines, the beds there are usually full.
Broke and feeling more than a little lonely, Yancey has
managed to hang onto his self-respect. While he has plenty of cause to take
vengeance on Noble, who is now filthy rich, he remains philosophical. Despite
what he has witnessed of the ruthlessness of the West, he is determined to
remain an honorable man.
Fortunes, it turns out, are about to be reversed in chapter
one as Yancey discovers a seam of gold running directly under the hospital.
When he learns of it, Noble uses every trick in the book to oust the sisters
from their property. Eventually, he simply seizes possession and throws them
out, patients and all.
The one thing more precious than gold in the camp is water,
and the sisters’ spring has been the only source of it for the whole camp. As
Noble dynamites his way under the hospital, he disturbs the underground water
flow, and without warning he finds himself and his enterprise confronting
problems he never expected.
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| Miners, San Juan County, Colorado, 1875 |
Character. Wheeler
draws a likeable and admirable character in Yancey, and for romantic interest,
there is Adelaide Kearny, proprietor of a saloon. A young widow, she has become
stranded in the West, barely making ends meet. Yancey’s tender affection for
her deepens the yearning for companionship that haunts him.
Yancey’s strength as a character doesn’t materialize in
action, as one expects in a standard western. He uses his intelligence and
knowledge of geology and mineralogy to outsmart Noble. But he is powerless
against the man’s relentless efforts to take advantage. With the town constable
and the town banker in his pocket, he can run Yancey out of town if he wants.
And he does.
The tougher nut for Noble to crack is Sister Carmela, who
will not be cowed by him. She refuses to do his bidding or yield to his
threats. He has to take the hospital from her by force. Her fearless faith in
her calling and her physical stamina keep her going. She’s a memorable presence
among the several threads of the story.
Two other characters deserve mention. Though both of them
are physically disabled, they command readers’ respect for being tireless
supporters of the sisters. There’s Rufus Borden, a doctor whose work is
sometimes interrupted by grand mal seizures. And there’s Slow Eddie, whose head injury in a mining accident has affected his ability to converse freely.
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| Mining camp, Arizona, 1909 |
Themes. The matter
of disability, in fact, is an underlying theme in the entire novel. How does a
person resist despair when dealt an irreversible blow? When a miner is brought
to the hospital having lost the use of his arm in an accident, Borden sees him
at a decision point:
The mines mangled men and spit
them out, and now Manx was another. But Doc had seen men make new lives out of
what was left of them. And he had seen others who didn’t try, or want to try,
and who sunk into bitterness.
Many of the central characters face insurmountable odds, seeming
to lose everything but their own will to carry on. Call it grit or character or
faith or moral fiber, they don’t give up. And among them all is a degree of
selflessness that still puts the needs of others before their own.
In this regard, Noble is the foil to them all. Facing his ruin when the wheel of fortune suddenly turns, he remains his own worst
self. Cold and heartless, though always with a smile, he tries to preserve his
wealth at novel’s end with actions that are nakedly chilling.
Read in the company of mining camp stories from the turn of
the last century, this novel shows some interesting ways that the genre has
evolved. The harsh working conditions for miners are far more prominent, and
there’s less respect for the get-rich-quick ethic we find in those earlier
stories. Noble, like Hearst in the HBO series Deadwood, is a greedy and unscrupulous s.o.b.
Most curious to me was the realization that I’d not come
across nuns before in reading early western fiction. Sister Carmela is true to
type, as the hard-nosed bride of Christ we know from movies and TV, but
religious folk in early westerns are typically Protestant. The nun as a stock
character in popular fiction seems to have emerged sometime since Owen Wister.
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| Mining camp, Arizona, 1909 |
Wrapping up. Wheeler
shows again with this novel that he is adept at telling stories that grip the
imagination while using a western setting to explore ideas and values. The
characters that come to life on these pages are genuine, and the portrayal of
the West is a corrective to romantic notions that want to see it idealized.
It’s also an interesting take on violence that doesn’t feature gun duels and shootouts. The damage that Noble does to the people
of the town, his total betrayal of public trust, his crassly callous disregard
for the welfare of others wound and kill as thoroughly as any firearms.
And in the final pages, the vengeance taken on him is
self-inflicted, though he does not yet know it. He walks away, free and clear
of the financial disaster he sees coming. But he will eat his heart out
when he discovers how he has been outwitted and outmaneuvered by Yancey. And
that’s vengeance enough.
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| Richard S. Wheeler |
Interview
Richard Wheeler has generously agreed to spend some time
here at BITS to talk about writing and the writing of Yancey’s Jackpot. I’m pleased to turn the rest of this page over to
him.
Richard, how did the idea for this novel suggest itself
to you?
In researching Virginia City, Montana, I discovered that
nuns, the Sisters of Charity of Leavenworth, operated a small hospital for
miners, and had similar hospitals in several mining towns, thus filling a need.
Few mining towns offered any significant medical help to
miners. It dawned on me that there might be a great story if the sisters’
hospital happened to be sitting on a bonanza lode. Thus the story was born.
Was the published version similar to how you first
conceived it or somewhat different?
Pinnacle published it as it was written, except for the
title. At that time, the publisher was hoping to bolster western sales by
employing titles the evoked classic 1940s and 50s stories. Vengeance Valley had been used several times and had that classical
western quality about it.
Unfortunately, it badly missed the mark, so much so that
some reviewers were caustic about it. The company graciously reverted the title
to me, enabling me to publish it under my original title.
Talk a bit about editing and revising this novel. After
completing a first draft, did it go through any key changes?
When I finish a draft, I try to view the story as a new
reader might, and look for things that could confuse or bore a reader. So my
revisions are aimed at clarity and movement. I want to state things in ways
that avoid confusion.
Elmer Kelton’s prose is more transparent than any other writer
I’m familiar with, and I always hoped to reach his level of lucidity. In his
case, it goes back to his pulp fiction days.
My other quest, when revising, is for plausibility. I just
hate it when a reader says whoa! Just the other day I caught myself writing
about bull oxen. If that had gone to print, I’d be drummed out of the company
of western writers.
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| Virginia City, Nevada, c1876 |
Were you thinking of any previous mining-camp novels or
stories while writing this one?
I suppose Ernest Haycox’s Alder Gulch was the portal to frontier mining. That was deepened
by Mark Twain’s mining yarns, and Bret Harte’s great gold rush stories. But
actually, it was a lot of nonfiction books, mostly histories of mining towns,
that filled me with the belief that these were stories begging to be told.
I have a wide shelf devoted to mining nonfiction, including
many technical books. There’s an amazing bookstore in Virginia City, Nevada,
that loaded me up with fabulous books. A memoir, Deep Enough, by Frank Crampton, handed me one of my most
powerful storylines in Goldfield.
Was there anything about this story that surprised you
in the writing of it?
Yes, its resolution, or ending. I did not know how the
story would end. But the ending leapt to mind one day as I pondered Yancey’s
shrewd grasp of geology. He finds the magical, almost mystical, key to success
and redemption, one that is deeply satisfying and just.
After more than a half-dozen years since its first
publication, would you write this novel any differently today?
I would recast Yancey now. I wanted to portray a man whose
gift was professional knowledge, in this case, of mineralogy and geology; a man
who came west without any skill with firearms, a man very like the farmers and
accountants and surveyors who flooded into dangerous country more or less
unarmed, and in any case, hesitant to use arms. I think now I would have given
Yancey a little more gravelly and rough personality.
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| Bodie, California, 1972 |
The word “jackpot” has numerous meanings. What was your
thinking in choosing it for the novel’s title?
The good earth offers us many jackpots. In mining towns,
these are often precious metals, but many western fortunes involved other
things, such as grass or water or common minerals or rights of way or beef.
There is another sort of jackpot, too. Yancey gets his girl. I like to think of
jackpots as big payoffs to thoughtful ventures.
What sort of research went into the writing of this
novel?
In addition to my large collection of mining histories,
which I have devoured and bookmarked, I explored numerous ghost towns (mostly vanished
now) and got a sense of how these amazing places sprang up in sheer wilderness
and became bustling cities overnight. There is also wonderful stuff in the
Montana Historical Society archives and library. I believe close to half of my
seventy-some novels involve frontier mining.