Review and interview
To paraphrase Winston Churchill, this western is a mystery
wrapped in an enigma. The enigma in this case is a man who rides in to a small
Wyoming ranch, the Little Six, and gets a job as a cowpuncher. The puzzle for
everyone, including the reader, is what he’s really up to.
Like Shane in many respects, he goes by a single name,
Dunbar, and he offers no other information about himself. He pokes around a
dam-building project that will bring irrigation to the rangeland. And when he
doesn’t disappear for days on his own, he hangs out in a nearby town. There he
might be found in the saloon or on the front porch of a woman whose husband,
Tut Whipple, is in charge of the dam project.
We witness all this through the eyes and ears of a young
cowhand, Grey Wharton, who narrates the story. Is Dunbar a range detective?
Some kind of troublemaker? Or just a drifter? The other cowboys at the ranch
get to resenting him, and Grey is unhappy to find him in the company of Ruth,
Whipple’s wife. Seems the motherless Grey is more than a little sweet on her
himself.
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Powder River Pass, Wyoming |
Plot. The plot
thickens as Dunbar becomes certain that the ranch owner’s cattle are being
rustled and butchered to feed the crews working on the new dam. There’s also
reason to believe he might be looking for a cave where robbers once stashed the
take from a robbery.
Whipple surrounds himself with tough guys who try to
intimidate Dunbar into minding his own business. But Dunbar is a powerful
fighter and needs only a couple good punches to handily dismiss anyone who
wants to get in his way. Matters take a nasty turn when one of the Little Six
cowboys is provoked into drawing his gun and gets shot dead.
The town fathers are yet another matter. They are unconvinced
by Dunbar’s claims of cattle rustling, and they close ranks when he says a town
marshal would provide some much-needed law enforcement. They have much to gain
by the success of the dam project and balk at interference by an outsider.
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Little Laramie River, 1905 |
Character. As it
turns out, Dunbar is a man on a mission. Like Shane he is a frontier knight
errant, come to bring justice where, by design or neglect, injustice has been
permitted to prevail. He has a code of conduct that is revealed in one of the
several thoughtful talks he has with the young Grey.
Unlike the black-and-white code of the West, his is what
might be called situational ethics. Actively defend what is right, he advises.
But don’t take on more than you can handle. One on one, a man might stop a
wrongdoer and hold him to account. But it’s no good going after the Big Guys,
like the railroads. They’ll just crush you.
Meanwhile, do your work, the work you believe in. Be
honest, be fair, even when the world is full of dishonesty and unfairness. In
dealing with others, steer a middle course between the Ten Commandments and the
Golden Rule. In other words, temper law with mercy.
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Oregon Trail, Wyoming, 1870 |
Romance. The novel
ends with a flash-forward, and we know that Grey grows up and 20 years later
has followed in his dead father’s footsteps, becoming a lawyer. Happily
married, he has weathered the trials and tribulations of young love and
courtship.
But during the course of the novel, he is still sorting
through a young adult’s hormonal urges that make sense only in retrospect. The
pretty Mexican girl who serves him meals at one of the saloons in town draws
him like a magnet. And then there is the married woman, Ruth, who mothers him
without fully realizing the claim his heart has made on her.
Wrapping up. Nesbitt
writes so familiarly about these characters on the high plains of Wyoming, you
feel transported back to their time and their world. The dialogue he writes has
the easy naturalness of everyday speech. And that dialogue sparks with life
when people are suspicious of each other or yielding to a rising surge of
anger.
He also reproduces the rhythms of talk likely to be heard
among the “fraternity of men who had the common interests of cattle, horses,
work, and weather.” We listen in as the Little Six men discuss the changes
being wrought on the plains by speculators and reclamation projects. And we
hear from them how progress means the loss of a way of life.
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John D. Nesbitt |
Interview
John Nesbitt has generously agreed to spend some time here at BITS to talk about writing and the writing of Dark Prairie. So I'm turning the rest of this page over to him.
John, we last talked here in July 2012. How has the last year
been for you as a writer?
It has been a good year, especially after being on the
street, as I have called it, as a result of the collapse of Dorchester
Publishing. I had been with them for thirteen years and had achieved some good
continuity with them in addition to winning some awards, and then they
imploded.
My last two novels with them did not go very far, and I
had the rights to two manuscripts returned to me. It took me a while to find
another publisher, and I am glad to have done so with Dark Prairie. Five Star is a very good company, with good
professional attention to all aspects from editing to cover design to marketing
and promotion.
Also during the last year I have had a collection of
poetry published with Western Trail Blazer, a publisher of e-books with
corresponding print format. WTB has done several of my works ranging from short
story to novella to book reprint, and this poetry collection, my first, is a very
special little thing for me. For those interested, it is entitled Thorns on
the Rose.
Talk about how the idea for this novel suggested itself
to you.
As often happens, I had a few different ideas converge.
One idea was that I wanted to have an almost-mythical main character who works
for the noble purpose of justice but who is not perfect. That's where I got
Dunbar. Because he would be somewhat mysterious, I needed to present him
through the eyes of a narrator.
That's where I got Grey Wharton. I wanted to have Dunbar
deal with a problem that, as I noted to myself, threatened the social body.
Several years ago, a crime like the one that Dunbar investigates took place not
far from where I live.
Like many people, I was very disturbed by what happened
(it seems so flat when I write about it in this way, but I would feel like even
more of a traitor if I were more specific), and it gave me the emotional base
to write a story in which I wanted to see justice served. So that's where I got
Annie Mora.
Is the published version of the novel closely similar
to your first draft, or was the revision process extensive?
The revision process was, I would say, moderate. The
version I submit to the publisher is usually the third draft, and then it goes
through editing. In the editing of this novel, there were no big changes such
as adding or taking out pages at a time.